Team: Your Mother judged by TomT64 Story: 10/20 Random Rules/Theme: 7/15 How Well Everything Works: 14/15 Quality of original content AND/OR usage of ripped/third party material: 20/20 Fun: 15/30 Overall Score: 66 Story: - 10/20 There doesn't appear to be much of a story, but I can see that it might have gone somewhere. It had a very interesting opening though. Hopefully the game will be expandfed and "finished." Random Rules/Theme: - 7/15 1 point off for not including "enter" as the button for action in the readme (yes I know it should be obvious, but SPACE has been the choice many times, and yes its too late to change that) I see no school location and also no minigame. I can only fairly give a 7 of 15 for this category. How Well Everything Works: - 14/15 The battle system was pretty cool. However it does depend on a fairly high end (above average) system to work properly. Other than that I see no bugs. Quality of original content AND/OR usage of ripped/third party material: - 20/20 Nice original content. The dungeon was interesting and it was obvious a lot of map work was done, but I do have to sy if I didn't know corey made the tiles, I'd think they were FF6 ripped. Also lots of dialogue even without much story does a logn way toward giving this area full points. Fun: - 15/30 I can only give half points here because it's less than half of a game. The fun all comes from the BS, which is fairly fun. There was no title screen or obligatory "Do not _____ your GBA" message, which threw me. It also threw me that "Your Mother" didn't come together like they have before. You guys have your next big chance in December.